Five of Pentacles, Bohemian Gothic Tarot

So, a card, the Five of Pentacles which is one that I always feel needs care. All comments - positive and negative and "not sure" - very welcome, but any specific proffered design solutions will probably not be acted on as we ideally want to hear issues not solutions if possible. Oh, okay, I sound like "Design Management 101" and the truth is we probably won't change much of anything to be honest, but knowing that, please do still comment if you'd like to. By the way, I have lightened this card considerably to show on screen as there is a real issue with the way the cards come out very, very dark on screen (they will look different when they are printed in CMYK). At least this way you can actually see some of the details.